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Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-10-04 08:50 PM


I sad over the loss that I am fixing to have
I feel like dropping
and never stopping

I Can't stand life
Just the way that things can be
things are just not right
it so much seems

I pray that things will be alright
for me everyday
I hope I dont have to be killed
over my broken heart in every way

Showing possitive
not saddness
is the key to my life
I don't want to die
over this unforgetable night.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
Sharksbean
Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368
jax
1 posted 2005-10-04 08:57 PM


hope go better for ya

-may the force be with you in poetry

xFromtheHeartx
Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80
Florida U.S.
2 posted 2005-10-04 09:36 PM


this poem shows real emotion laura, thanks for sharing


Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
3 posted 2005-11-04 10:19 AM


keep the faith I know sometimes that seem so unbearable but yet we make it through look with in your heart.
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