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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-10-01 03:20 PM



Slime Time
~*Marge Tindal*~

Black thoughts ooze
covering me in their slime
There is no wakening reason
for the dark of my rhyme~

Stooping low, I kneel to feel
the bottomless well
I grope the ebon darkness
in which I daily dwell~

Finding only the slime-of-time
covering me …covering me
oozing me ever darker,
deeper than I’ve been
in this dwell of Hell
again and again
and again~


~I thought it only fair that as long
as I was moderating the Dark Forum ... that I should contribute to it~
*I found my black ink*

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2005 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-10-01 03:23 PM


Marge/sis....dark sounds strange coming from your pen.  I'll bet you can do anything you set your mind to, now can't you?  
iliana
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2 posted 2005-10-01 03:30 PM


Marge, you captured an awful feel, that's for sure.  Don't stay in that thought very long....lol.   ....jo
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3 posted 2005-10-01 03:41 PM


Marge, you are so creative I do believe you could write about anything!

This would be great for Halloween!

Very dark...and very good!

Hugs~Nancy

Justbleu
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4 posted 2005-10-01 05:01 PM


Wow....this is sooo different from you!!!!  They are right indeed....Dear Marge you could write about anything!!!!
You have many colors Marge as do us all!!!!

HUGS,
Bridgette

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5 posted 2005-10-01 06:54 PM


I'll bet they have you moderating 'Dark' because you have such a sunny nature.

Please lift your quill
From that black ink well
Your story of slime
To us, you can't sell
You are smiles and huglets,
Everyone can tell.

Rae



  

Betty
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6 posted 2005-10-01 09:15 PM


This is cute but quite different for you.
Betty

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7 posted 2005-10-01 09:34 PM


Dear Marge:

This is more than dark enough for me!!! When I first saw this, I thought "Marge wrote this?" I was relieved to read the explanation!
Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2005-10-03 12:32 PM


black ink is interesting for you, Marge.

I know this poem and this ink.

"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real"
-Linkin Park_

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2005-10-03 08:44 AM



The kindness of you all reaches deep into the heart of this poetess~

There are times in our lives when we all find ourselves floundering in the black ink of things ... I just don't care to dwell there for too long~

And ... RAE~
That is gorgeous ... thank you~

All happy thoughts sent your way dear ones~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Angelheart
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10 posted 2005-10-03 04:36 PM


a delight to read, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2005-10-04 06:50 AM


It's good to spill some black ink now and again Marge ... I like your internal rhymes and flow in this. Eery and dark, nicely done.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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12 posted 2005-10-04 11:25 PM


Very black ink indeed...well put...

Click

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2005-10-13 06:43 PM



Thank you all for the replies to the dark of my ink~

I try not to dwell here often ... but at the same time, find the need once in awhile~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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