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Broken Rose
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Broken Rose |
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RennieandBoo Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47Florida! |
Broken Rose Like a Shattered glass mirror No pigment showing fading so slowly Whitered away I'm not a Broken Rose I will never be found Black Rose blooming Hatred, Dark clouds brewing Thunderstorm Lightening crash Shriek with pain Cut me does my blood not run free? Pain and suffering is not a feeling Broken Rose Whitered dow Petals falling into a melody I will never be Found A Broken Rose "Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken" |
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RennieandBoo Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47Florida! |
its whitered down not dow. sorry for the mistake people! "Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Do broken roses bleed and pour big droplets of blood all over the place? Nice poem. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Oh yeah, and to fix your mistake go to the little icon by the title with the little blue window box around it and the hand with a finger, thats the edit button. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
i like this poem, had me thinking alot. thanks for sharring |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this is such a good write, full of thoughts to make you think, thanks for sharing this. Poetry can get you very far |
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RennieandBoo Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47Florida! |
Sorry I can't edit it since its past 24 hours! |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Ask a moderator... maybe. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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