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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
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0 posted 2005-09-21 11:11 PM


the rain sweeps within.
the wind encircles my body.
the pain seeps through.
the lies flow out.

cant beleive all the drama.
cant beleive all the lies.
its easier when you let them
keep walking out of your life.

the wind picks up,
chills go through your spine.
you think about the world,
as you sip on your wine.

floods surround you,
hurricanes roar.
things arent focused on the constantwar.
"gangsters" pollute the city
with their looting and violence.

what has this world come to?

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2005-09-27 04:00 AM


You mispelled a few words.  But I guess you did just open a package.  Nice.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2005-09-27 06:02 AM


this is sad
and hits hard

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

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