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sweetpoetess
Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida

0 posted 2005-09-17 11:19 PM


Take me with you
Take me from this hell
I have been living in

I am sick of being
All alone
In this cold world

I sit waiting
For that perfect one
Who never seems to come

Take me with you
So I don't think
About how alone I am

Take me on a trip
To find myself
To discover the real me

Please my friend
Take me with you
I beg

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

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stevebrklynnyc
Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292
GA, Camden
1 posted 2005-09-18 02:31 AM


One day you will turn around and there he will be, trust me, dont go looking, you never know when it will happen, be patient, by the way, nice poem, Steve.
Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
2 posted 2005-09-19 01:31 PM


yes thats right..  it will happen when you dont at least expect it to..that is a good poem .... thanks for sharing this it was very sad yet very good....................  

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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