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KuruShio
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since 2003-11-18
Posts 110
0 posted 2005-09-06 11:15 PM


Deserved hatred,
Insolent cow's eyes,
On human visage.

Yea, tho we all be sheep. The sheppard is the man with the gun.

Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless.  
KuruShio  (DeadlyBob)
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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
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1 posted 2005-12-17 12:31 PM


Thank you for this, Kuru.

Check your first and second lines.
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