Buddy - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-08-31 05:31 AM

Friendly smiles
Open mind
Empty look
Great big smile
Perky great to meet

A thousand ways to get away
I see the limit of your faith
Its full extension
You see an empty face
You don't see enough

Watch the notch in motion change
He whittles it away
Open minded clever
Fill in the gaps, paraphrase
I'm not worried at all

The big gory x-rated scenes
Cross your lonely face
And stretch threads of silk with thorns,
The blood gushes through
The tears and the pain seen from above

I watch your sadness
From here
In my mind
The torment you can't deny...
is no secret
and he knows from his garden of bloom
where he watches it all
angels in wait...

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2005-08-31 07:49 PM

I may be way off here but man I saw a lot in this:

first I saw a preacher who has lost his faith and still has to face a congregation,
then I saw Jesus - in Gethsemene,
behind him, the devil . . . waiting.

Like from the Devils' point of view - a fallen angel.

I even saw God watching His son from above.
In his torment.

This is astounding, Craig.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-09-01 06:42 PM

Thanx, I wrote it thinking about a girl at work. She's pretty hot, but there's obviously alot more to her than just the way she looks.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-09-01 10:51 PM

awww now reading it like that - I love when I get so much out of a write.

its beautiful. Good Luck.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2005-09-02 01:32 PM

thank you Sue.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.