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EveGnosis
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0 posted 2005-08-27 11:43 PM



what if i fall short?
should i mock my own attempt
at truly living?


of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

[This message has been edited by EveGnosis (08-28-2005 12:09 AM).]

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littlewing
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1 posted 2005-08-28 12:06 PM


Oh, now this, by far, is astounding!
Poetic and philosophical.
Amazinggggggggg . . .
I adore this.

(and NO)

Mysteria
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2 posted 2005-08-28 12:08 PM


Now that was truly awesome!
Edder
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3 posted 2005-08-28 12:40 PM


verrry nicely done
green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2005-08-28 02:46 AM


brilliant.  You freak.  I put mine in the wrong forum by accident, oops.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

wranx
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5 posted 2005-08-29 11:55 AM


Very nicely done!


littlewing
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6 posted 2005-08-30 09:23 AM


back to the top with this . . .
Ceinwyn
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7 posted 2005-09-12 12:45 PM


I think I'll just bump this for you

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Purity
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8 posted 2005-12-18 10:16 AM


OK, wow! Reviving time here, but only in keeping with the current situation...lol This was really good, Eve!Can't believe I missed it first go round.

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

littlewing
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9 posted 2005-12-18 11:30 AM


Thanks for bumping this and yes, it IS good, isn't it?

Thank you guys.

Annie78
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10 posted 2005-12-18 04:47 PM


it's very very good.....shook me to the core
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Hollow_Emptiness
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11 posted 2006-01-10 02:02 AM


Went on holiday, nice surprise here.

Like it very much, and you.

Hollow.
Courts.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

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