Dark Poetry #4 |
Looney (Littlewing's Senryu Challenge) |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sue, this could be either a senryu or haiku. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love loons, and this is the coolest senryu! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG this is awesome! (you trying to tell me something?) Isn't this another form of poetry, too? (With all the L's) What do you call that? Where is Karen? I LOVE this, thank you Sharon. Very well met indeed! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Me thinks you mean this, but I didn't even come close? http://www.tnellen.com/cybereng/lit_terms/alliteration.html If you return to the literary terms page (bottom left) it explains all the terms to you. (Not that I use them mind you. but I like to read about them.) Hmm, now that you mention there could be a subliminal message in there alright. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
In other words restless inside (my e-mail address), SLOW DOWN!!! Its not always about me, but I have a feeling that might be why my ex-girlfriend is my ex-girlfriend (if she is, I really don't even know! lol, Crap.) -GIS |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I thought alliteration, isnt it something else? Oh this is going o drive me insane. Oh yeah, major subliminal there . . . |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sharon... wonderfully done.. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A dark AND alliterate Senryu. Whodathunkit? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
breathe . . . |
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