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Mysteria
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0 posted 2005-08-27 07:57 PM





Sue, this could be either a senryu or haiku.  

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1 posted 2005-08-27 08:00 PM


I love loons, and this is the coolest senryu!
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2 posted 2005-08-27 10:02 PM


OMG this is awesome!

(you trying to tell me something?)

Isn't this another form of poetry, too?
(With all the L's)
What do you call that?
Where is Karen?

I LOVE this, thank you Sharon.

Very well met indeed!

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3 posted 2005-08-28 12:12 PM


Me thinks you mean this, but I didn't even come close?
http://www.tnellen.com/cybereng/lit_terms/alliteration.html If you return to the literary terms page (bottom left) it explains all the terms to you.  (Not that I use them mind you. but I like to read about them.)

Hmm, now that you mention there could be a subliminal message in there alright.  

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4 posted 2005-08-28 02:59 AM


In other words restless inside (my e-mail address), SLOW DOWN!!!  Its not always about me, but I have a feeling that might be why my ex-girlfriend is my ex-girlfriend (if she is, I really don't even know! lol, Crap.)

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5 posted 2005-08-28 10:47 AM


I thought alliteration, isnt it something else?  Oh this is going o drive me insane.
Oh yeah, major subliminal there . . .

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6 posted 2005-08-28 12:12 PM


Sharon...

wonderfully done..

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7 posted 2005-08-29 11:59 AM


A dark AND alliterate Senryu.

Whodathunkit?

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8 posted 2005-08-30 09:24 AM


breathe . . .
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