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Dark Poetry #4

One became two

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-08-21 12:25 PM

IF I could take away your tears,
I would gladly give up my years,

IF I could see you laugh once more,
Mi lord, you can have my soul,

My love for you has not died,
But I choose to accept this end,

IF I can stop all of your fears,
I would gladly take them on,

If I were to be sent to hell,
So you could be in heaven,
I think not twice,

My heart shakes at each beat,
Knowing that you are not it,

IF you could ever forgive me,
Then I would forget myself,

IF the next man cares for you right,
I will give up this fight,

My life without you is a grave,
Which waits for me to fall in,

IF I ever see you again,
I promise to hold back the tears,

IF I could take back one moment,
It would be the last time we met,

These are my confessions,
Once a whole heart-
Now broken in two.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

NightFall
Member

since 2004-01-28

Posts 88
The land known as England

1 posted 2005-08-21 01:10 PM

Beautiful

The greatest thing you will ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2005-08-22 02:20 AM

echoing the above . . .

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2005-08-22 02:24 AM

Yeah, very nice. Broken hearts are so beautiful. So humble and they accept love.
Jesus rocks. Nice poem.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

4 posted 2005-08-22 08:32 AM

awesome poem .... you write using sooo much emotion that even the coldest, blackest of hearts would be melted back into feeling by your words....
keep writing
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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