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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-08-15 11:07 PM


Only completing this as part of me
I can see flowers and free love
Judgemental freaks that won't leave me alone
Denouncing who I am and what I'm about

Grab your throat with doctrine
Your stone eyes
I can almost think
Psycho, twisted, fearful
Be armed with your paranoia

Set me in a place where my stance is lower than you
You can peer over to me,
While looking down
You're so much better than me, aren't you?
God couldn't possibly move through me
And spread his fire
You would condemn it and declare heresy
Light a match, cause I'll burn better
But don't you DARE complain about the smell

Pour your concrete in my lap
And tell me I'm dead
Or maybe I'll die soon
Perhaps the Great Dragon will take me under his wing...

But after you're gone
And I'm somewhere in this shade
Who's left for your empty spot?
You laid the tracks and deserved your reward
But your job isn't finished

If a plant killed its seeds
Exstinction would come in one generation

Give me water, and let me live
Guilt, trickling away



Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
EveGnosis
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1 posted 2005-08-17 09:39 AM


your best yet. this is my themesong! i find it grotesquely funny that people choose the route of judgement over and over. and it's not even a paved road, just a rocky, dirty little road where brakes don't work as you travel down and down...

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-08-17 05:05 PM


Mike, you're crazy.  Thats exactly what its about.  Right on my friend.  God bless, peace.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

littlewing
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3 posted 2005-08-22 02:05 AM


and also, not only of judgement but of nature continuing on no matter what mankind destroys.

Lots of cool subtext here, Craig.
Even the title.

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2005-08-22 02:17 AM


Ants are eatting me.  Thank you little wing.  I take it your in maybe new york time or eastern time.  It says you responded at 2, something am. and its 1:16am. here.  Kinda cool, or should I say rad?

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

littlewing
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5 posted 2005-08-22 11:31 AM


LOL, yes NY time and get some bug spray, man.  *smile*
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6 posted 2005-08-22 03:03 PM


This indeed belongs in a Dark poetry forum.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

green_itchy_stuff
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7 posted 2005-08-22 10:41 PM


The ants are really bizarre, because they're in my room and I don't ever take food to my room.  They were just hanging out, and bitting me, lol.  

I guess it is a bit dark Xeonox.

-GIS

littlewing
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8 posted 2005-08-23 08:23 AM


reminds me of when I was little, the ants.  That IS bizarre but I have seen them all over the place here, too - not in the house, but in trees and everything.  Very weird.  
green_itchy_stuff
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9 posted 2005-08-23 02:42 PM


Maybe its like an ant comspiracy, and they're all just confused... ?  

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

littlewing
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10 posted 2005-08-24 08:45 AM


Maybe the ants know something we don't?  LOL
green_itchy_stuff
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11 posted 2005-08-26 09:42 PM


LOL.  Obviously.  I don't even like to be in my room as much.  God bless.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

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