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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2005-08-15 08:28 AM


Sure i can admit it
and lose a little dignity
but i wont allow it
pride has got the best of me
i wont admit i want you
in more ways than one
i'll act like it doesn't bother me
like you were just "Spur of the Moment" fun
i wont admit how free i felt
or how you made me feel
how you made my heart melt
or how i pinched myself, re-assuring that it's real
i wont admit how i love it when you smile
it warms me up inside
i wont admit i remember all the things you said
during that short while
i wont admit you pissed me off
or how i wish you would've called
i wont admit i miss you
not even hint it a little bit
No, not at all
sure i can admit it
lose a little dignity
but i wont allow it
pride has got the best of me

Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next?

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click1
Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa
1 posted 2005-08-17 10:30 PM


well done!!   I saw it, I felt it!!

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2005-08-22 02:09 AM


I really love this, because it just FLOWS and so very true, we do not always FOLLOW our hearts, rather our instinct.  
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2005-08-22 02:20 AM


Wow.  You've gotten better.  That was awesome.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

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