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EveGnosis
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0 posted 2005-08-13 12:34 PM


unfortunately, you won't see it coming;
if he has fire eyes and a cold heart,
it adds up to a game where your loss is real...
and painful...
thrust in a closet where mercy dares not go...
oh, you'll give, and he'll take,
and then he'll bend you until you break into...
nothing left.

he'll even turn others against you;
those you thought would dance around the pit
for you, shun instead... because he's that good,
and his fire eyes entrance with attraction
and, yes!..
with rage hidden under the facade of love.

but deep within those fire eyes,
sits a man you know and have seen before,
shrouded by misery... playing a game
where his loss will be real,
and painful...

even more so than yours.




of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

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1 posted 2005-08-14 02:58 PM


Eve~
This is a stirring penning~
Drew me in ... and held me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-08-14 10:07 PM


Its talking about a strong love,   maybe.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

green_itchy_stuff
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3 posted 2005-08-17 11:36 PM


This is definitely about love... lol.  Maybe in more of a Mexican-Catholic style.  Whats really in the heart above all.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
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4 posted 2005-08-20 10:05 PM


Gah. Mike. You use the english language to your advantage don't you?
Truth and fire.

Courts.
Hollow.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
5 posted 2005-08-22 02:18 AM


God, this has a lot in here, amazing write.  I saw such a powerplay here and it can be seen from both sides, too.  

The side of the one doing the hurt and the hurting.

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