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Dark Poetry #4

Locked Waterfall

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-08-08 02:29 AM

Its always rushing over me
Silent screams
Memories, tremors, punishment for nothing I've done
I want escape

sigh

Retarded chaos impaired reality
Look up for the remote control
Just to push a button
And a piece of me falls
In the couch

But thats right
I'm not on the couch
And the water is still falling
Where does it come from

I find myself.

Starring abscent minded
Not comprehending
...(ignorant)...
Stench of alcohol

Pride about who I was
Or am
Or will be

Forgetting whats more important than my ego
Where I'm supposed to be
Have honor
And please take

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2005-08-12 03:24 AM

I love it. Haven't read you for so long. A perfect welcome back if there ever was one. Don't you think waterfalls...are...I don't know, constant. Peaceful, powerful even. This poem conjured images like a magician and a rabbit.
Thanks.

Hollow.
Courts.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

2 posted 2005-08-13 12:55 PM

"punishment for nothing i've done..."

i remember ethan hawke singing this tune in "reality bites"... "i'm nothin'... that's me".

you've gone and gotten too good.

mikey

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2005-08-14 10:04 PM

Thank you guys.

Hollow- Yeah waterfalls are especially constant if its the river of God flowing to the low places, even if ones confused.

Eve- Thank you. I'm not exactly sure who ethan hawke is. I'm not really against t.v. ,but I don't watch it too often. Maybe I should. Thank you.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

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