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Dark Poetry #4

my only crime

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-08-06 12:19 PM

Are you alright?
Feeling fine now,
Months have gone by,
Without a sound,

Been thinking of u-
Might have made that call,
But realized what was said,
Do u recall how it use to be?

I am stuck on your love,
Too late now-
I know that and feel the hurt,
But don’t u still want me?

I know you were too real,
To be with me for a lifetime,
Must have done some bad crimes,
For I pay them in this life,

Don’t cry to what I say,
Only once in my life,
I felt this way,
I am going weak-
But,
Strong with you near me,

Can you see in my eyes?
For my words can’t show,
How swift my feelings flow,
You can’t see the shaking,
That got me going crazy,

Baby, would you think twice,
About giving me one chance,
Just prove me wrong, and
Show me that our love is-
Still going strong,

I know you still feel the love,
Just tell me it’s still there,
And I drop the world on a dime,
Wanting to be with you-
Is my only crime.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

1 posted 2005-08-13 01:11 AM

"there's a chance you will be there,
wondering what to do...
how to play my role, i'll leave it up to you.
if i disguise my smile, it gives too much away...
what if we can speak???
what then shall i say?
don't you be too long...
something has gone wrong;
the chances are all gone." (g.russell - air supply)

been here. felt this.
beautiful poem xeonox. invokes many memories of all that has been lost in my last relationship.

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

NightFall
Member

since 2004-01-28

Posts 88
The land known as England

2 posted 2005-08-14 01:52 PM

I really like this, shows feelings of one person hurt, but it shares many others perspectives of what its like to feel this way. Very cool write, you captured the feeling extremely well.

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