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xEmperorEmber
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

0 posted 2005-08-04 07:07 AM

chaotic delirium
Got me on a static dream plain
between the shadows...
outside the light lines
Waiting
Singing
Calling

"Astral. Why do i feel
Forever
Is Never
Coming? My love."

Appearing
calmly And with Wings she replies,
"Here below the stars..
I think gravity
is failing us all."

Mind Screw
Eyes Pried
Its Morning...
Dreamers

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 2005-08-06 11:43 AM

I don't usually care for.. shorter poems that leave more to the imagination, but this struck a chord with me.. I don't know, it was interesting, it sparked thought.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-08-08 02:17 AM

Hey Paul, I think it would be a good idea to get in contact with one another once again.

About the actual poem...
Its perfect. I know you. A faulty acrobat is one that has defects, and then does defective acrobatics. Nice.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

xEmperorEmber
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

3 posted 2005-08-08 03:52 AM

Thanks for the replies guys.

Right now i am currently working at the a Music Store in the mall if you want to swing by sometime. FYE

Goodnight

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

4 posted 2005-08-12 03:29 AM

Hello there. Deeply impressed. You are rocking my world. That was some wicked stuff man. Loved it to bits. The "under the stars" stanza made my night.
Hope to see your name up on the boards again soon.

Hollow.
Courtney.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

Defective
Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 73
Salisbury NC

5 posted 2005-09-05 04:06 PM

Hey Paul give me a call youre really tall hall hall

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2005-09-09 09:20 PM

"Mind Screw"

Yep...thats what a good dream feels like to me after having to wake up.

Enjoyed this. It fits my mood these days.

"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real"
-Linkin Park_

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