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Dark Poetry #4

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Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2005-08-02 01:04 PM

Not sure of a title... any ideas would be greatly appreciated.

Exquisite emptiness
Filling the vast void within
No happiness, no joy
Nor anger, or sorrow
Only nothingness fills this place
What can you possibly do
With someone who refuses to feel
Except to feel nothing at all
Upon his face no smile or frown
No expression left save one
A blank canvas, waiting to be
To take shape and form
If only it were so
His eyes pools of black
No trace of what he was
Nor any of what he is now
Merely a ghost in a shell
Just a hollow vessel
Of the man he used to be

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

1 posted 2005-08-02 02:55 PM

Hollow Man

Ghost in a Shell

Shadow's Shadow

Dark Arts of Being

Annulled

Liquidated

Self Expunged

Take yer pick.

Paragon
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 114

2 posted 2005-08-02 06:48 PM

well done, I liked the concept however the beginning of it was sortof choppy for some reason or other but the rest was enjoyable.

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