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jjote
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0 posted 2005-07-28 02:06 AM



Scraps and shatterings of metal
lie neglected in junkyards.
Once these were made of strongest iron.

A man huddles, weathered and beaten,
his fingers shaped like cigar minnows.
The dimming of his years stalks him
like a cloak waiting to be shrugged off.

My immediate world is foggy and detached.
In the half-light of dusk, I breathe
the smell of mold, dried-up leaves and dust.
I sit in a rocker, studying ugliness.
Crying feels as right as rain.

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Martie
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1 posted 2005-07-28 11:51 AM


jjote

I like the use of imagery to paint what you see...but for some reason I don't find it ugly, but beautiful!

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