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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
They deliberately cut themselves Along with my blood The streets are red There are puddles of sin everywhere It drips and pours And oh, the pain Love for mankind Apparent blind lies Faceless truth high above Looks down in rage Real and raw from the truth Trust shameful selfish Real and raw from the truth Trusting my own brain I don't need to say it twice Can always turn back, not condemned Remember who he is Chip away the lies Pour out love Do whats right and be numb to death Love for mankind Apparent blind lies Faceless truth high above Looks down in rage Real and raw from the truth Trust shameful selfishness Real and raw from the truth Trusting my own brain He knows Its no secret You're alive and you're no ghost Your skin is real, you exist When you're gone you never come back This is your choice what will you do Love for mankind Apparent blind lies Faceless truth high above Looks down in rage Real and raw from the truth Trust shameful selfishness Real and raw from the truth Trusting my own brain They deliberately cut themselves Along with my blood The streets are red There are puddles of sin everywhere It drips and pours And oh, the pain Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I like the overall poem, but I did not like the repeating stanzas. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you, but the repeating stanzas except the last one are actually the chorus. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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