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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX 
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I could have lived forever just to see your smile Traveled to the ends of time to be near your every breath I just wanted to be like you To be with you And in a world of mice and men I was your mouse Ruining me Destroying my very being until there is nothing left Of course "it wasn't your fault" You are the victim... I could have lived forever just to see your smile I picked up my phone Open my door and then my heart to you... But you and your faithless ways lead me down the path that I never wanted to be on You became everything I never wanted to be Bleeding me of my youth Bleeding me of my love Just bleeding till I was broken and cold I could have lived forever just to see your smile Now I can live forever never to see you again. Love, Ladycat *hugs to my friend Keli that is going through a hard time right now.* Insanity in individuals is something rare but in groups, parties, nations and epochs, it is the rule.-Friedrich Nietzsche |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
"I could have lived forever just to see your smile Now I can live forever never to see you again." maybe it shouldn't be so forever, maybe there could be another someone with just that smile?? |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
I really like this. It was well written, and you executed repetition perfectly. Thanks for sharing. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I have felt this way about someone. Its a little confusing isn't it? Love reading you, Lady. "I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real" -Linkin Park_ |
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