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Mad_Hatter
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0 posted 2005-07-11 11:20 PM


If you guys could give me some true and honest feedback on this one, it would be greatly appreciated.  I think it's one of the more honest things i've written...let me know how you feel.

Sometimes you just need
to climb up on a safe roof
To see your past
To crutch your future
Sometimes you just need
to rest your head on clean ground
To clear your head
To tame delirium

When you know where to start
Let me know
When you know how it ends
I’ll learn to let you go
Until then I’ll be a worry wart

Sometimes it’s just not enough
to hide in this addiction
And from your past
And from your future
Sometimes it’s just not enough
to realize you’re wrong
And clear your head
And calm your nerves

When you know where to start
Let me know
When you know how it ends
I’ll learn to let you go
Until then I’ll be your worry wart

Tell me not to
And I don’t
You think you’ll scar
But you won’t
I’m just worried
Just a worry wart

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