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Musicmaker1969
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0 posted 2005-07-08 10:46 PM


You shattered my world in such a dark way
A life I will never get back
Exposing me bare, you never did care
Of what my life would lack.

You touched me in ways I could not conceive
You pressured my body and mind
It was our secret, never to tell
A shame that so tightly binds.

You left me alone when you were fulfilled
In pain and confusion so dark
I washed and I washed, the scent would not go
It hung in the air like a lark.

My life has been wasted and time has moved on
And yet you continue to haunt
A child of 3, you just wouldn’t see
The harm and the days you still taunt.

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

© Copyright 2005 Sheri Liegh Adams - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
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Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2005-07-09 05:42 AM


I love this.  Jesus is so awesome.  If I were able to have any of his traits the way he did I would want his amount of self-control.  Everything else came from that.  This poem is awesome.  

As far as learning and advise, just let it flow as it feels.  

-GIS

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stoopid Angel"

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