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Dark Poetry #4

Hope of the End

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-01-22 08:28 PM

You took my heart in you'r
frigid hand, surpressing all
the life from me. Leaving me
numb, leaving me dead cold.
My evanescent screams will echo
inside you always, tourturing
you for all eternity.

As wilted as a dying flower,
I lie still and cold. No longer
screaming no longer caring, what
could life hold? There is no
such ebullient thing here, with
all darkness closing in. Soon
I will suffocate on the wieght.

Tourtured by life it's self,
and all the painfull memories.
I'm giving in to what I hope is
better, what should save me in the
end.

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (01-23-2008 07:40 PM).]

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

1 posted 2008-01-22 08:45 PM

Good write. I like how you resemble yourself to a dying flower. Your stanzas are beautifully written. Good job.

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