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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-07-02 04:14 PM



In the beginning
Firm concentrated, alive
Wise in thousands of ways
With no intelligence

How did anger come?
Questions answers
Pluses and negatives
Detourents
Shady place of green

A small desperate cry
Scream
Millions and billions in wait
Delivering the thickest undeniable Hell
Hurt of somewhere in progression

Little hear my cry
Bent on this state of mind
Toy boat tsunami
Watch it float
Wonderfully complex and pastel color

Hard stench of witchcraft
Promises, promises, promises
Head heavy under there
With the brown hair
So clear and beautiful, fade

Understand...
Tell me you know
Jesus the wisest perfect
Pendulum
I can see the teeth hurt

Stone
Remove the stone
Perfectly round and solid
Doesn't skip and stinks
Roll away and set me free

Makes you mad
Makes, YOU mad
Puke my friend, just understand
Forget about me, relax
Just remember God, love, happiness in bliss, and paradise

Praise God

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stupid Angel"

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Musicmaker1969
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1 posted 2005-07-08 10:59 PM


Kind of hard to understand but in the end the message is clear.  Satan is the enemy and he is the only enemy and he works inside the hearts of men and women which is why we have so much sorrow, pain, war, etc.  I totally agree with your writing here.

Sheri

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-07-16 08:23 PM


Thank you.  Maybe I write a little too abstract for my own good sometimes.  Sorry it was unclear.  But not really, because I just write it the way it feels.  So thank you.

-GIS

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stoopid Angel"

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