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Hellfire
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since 2005-06-23
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0 posted 2005-06-23 05:38 PM


I know the bottom.
It is what you fear.
I do not fear it:
I have been there....

is it in
the cover of night
that you do weep
for yourself?

is it in that
darkness
that you realize,
that you are forced to realize
your actions?

do you question
your existance
when you know
what you have done?

are you saddened
by the thought
of all
you have destroyed
and all
you have yet
to accomplish?

and do i
make you see
am i the one
to shine the light
on your
scars?

is that why
it's always
me?


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with you
1 posted 2005-06-23 11:13 PM


whoa! what an emotion packed first post! Welcome to pip, I hope to read more from you
Greeneyes
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2005-06-23 11:16 PM


Big welcomes to Passions, I hope you enjoy your time here....

please check your email for a specail greeting
Greeneyes~

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2005-06-24 01:16 AM


ALWAYS:

are you saddened
by the thought
of all
you have destroyed
and all
you have yet
to accomplish?


provoking thoughts which drift through my own mind every single day.  Welcome to the darkside.



Cloud 9
Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980
Ca
4 posted 2005-06-24 06:16 PM


Hits home for me. I love this.
Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
5 posted 2005-06-24 10:06 PM


WELCOME!
That was really awesome. Very happy to have you.

Hollow.
Courts.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

spritrider87
Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294
NH
6 posted 2005-06-25 07:38 AM


This is good. I'll be up all night just thinking about what was said in this. though normally it is other people that make me see what i have done....

"Love struk my heart and it fell from the sky. I wish I wish it not to die. And if it goes and your to late I wish I wish you not to hate."

tonyc
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since 2005-06-25
Posts 5
TN
7 posted 2005-06-25 03:46 PM


deep, and emcompassing

TonyC

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