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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-06-19 04:11 AM

Specifically cut and welded together
Screws tightened
Fobot
Move exactly as you were programmed
Mechanical existence

Feel pain
Short circuit mainstream flow
Liars create rust and squeeky parts
Clogs of old fluids in need of change
Renew

Block bolder unmoving intellect
Relax
Slow yourself down
Lights, what is sleep
Keep on

Let you down
Not your perfect man
I wasn't made so
I can't do so
And too much use makes it smoke

Blinking light
A ready signal
Work and get dirty
Greasy dark workroom
Smelly me, I'm sorry I stink

Brainless
Forgetful
Little bits malfunction
Still in perfect design
Operating properly, remember Jesus

His name is Satan a.k.a. The Stupid Angel

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2005-07-01 09:54 AM

You haven't disappointed me yet. An excellent write.

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

2 posted 2005-07-01 11:12 AM

Excellent

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2005-07-01 06:42 PM

interesting write..a bit choppy for my taste.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2005-07-02 04:04 PM

Thank you all. About the choppy bit. It happens. God bless.

-GIS

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stupid Angel"

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

5 posted 2005-10-03 04:50 PM

interest write it is, thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

6 posted 2005-10-03 08:40 PM

--O-K--, thanx.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2005-10-04 06:56 AM

and the machinery keeps grinding . . .
very well done, reminded me of
political protest . . .

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

8 posted 2005-10-04 11:21 PM

I didn't think about that, but you're right. Kinda cool.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

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