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ljossberir
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since 2003-05-04
Posts 81
Ny, USA

0 posted 2005-06-03 02:53 AM


Rescue


Oh, in what far off land did I reside?
In what sort of nightmare was I occupied?
Rescued, was it where I least liked to hide?
How long did you struggle against this tide?

I was deaf while I was wailing
You were blind while I was failing
Hopeless then, I felt like bailing
You alone kept this ship sailing

There was a corner to which I would retreat
The same corner in which we would meet
Shackles on my ankles, I felt the heat
You alone released my feet

Can you tell me where did I go?
In what place was I tortured so?
Being rescued, did I cry 'no'?
How hard did you have to row?


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Sikanda
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since 2002-10-08
Posts 54

1 posted 2005-06-06 01:48 PM


I like! This poem really flows...I could easily see it as a song!
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