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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2005-05-28 02:05 AM



hey everyone..i havent written in a looong tyme...and this probably sucks really bad...but i needed a start right?! right.


Too many things
left to be said...
too many fairy tales
left to be read...

to many dreams
yet to be fullfilled...
too many hopes
completely killed....

too much to forget..
all the pain you caused...
too risky to let...
you keep my heart on pause...

I have to let go...
i have to move on...
my heart turns cold..
my feelings gone.

~karissa





I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

© Copyright 2005 Karissa - All Rights Reserved
Christioned
Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93
Huddling in the dark
1 posted 2005-05-28 07:36 PM


It's great to see you back. I've truly missed your work. Oh by the way, this isn't bad. Whenever someone goes away from something they must sometimes start over a new. This isn't one of those times. : )

"See my wrists;
I feel your pain."-Creed

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2005-05-29 05:34 PM


thanks...its good to know that i can write something decent again. i have been in this little hole...for a looooooooooong time...it feels good to get out of it.

~karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

aussie teen
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
3 posted 2005-06-01 06:18 AM


awesome work kissa... it feels amazing to be out of the hole doesnt it...
i know how you feel as well and its great to see you back here again... keep the writing coming girl.
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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