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Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

0 posted 2005-05-19 02:22 AM



Can't you cry like I do?
I know you've got it in you,
to rend and not be mended,
run and not be rescued.

I'm closer now than ever,
to a peace I half remember,
though the years, and disappointments
in between, were hard to weather.

If the light to which I'm pressing
never lends the promised blessing,
tell the next man how you met me,
'cause the world has a way of forgetting.

It's only a tragedy after we bleed.
Your pain doesn't count 'til it's stained the sheets.

© Copyright 2005 Shay D. - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2005-05-20 12:39 PM


Yeah I met her on piptalk.  Its a website.  Lay down your gun and grab a guitar, a pen, and some paintbrushes then make a map.  Its how to escape chaos.

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me.  -The Beattles

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
2 posted 2005-05-23 07:16 AM


Nice Write.......I Liked the flow...

"Trina"

Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next?

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