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Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand

0 posted 2005-05-15 02:26 AM


I have my fingers pacing my pen
And my toes curled in my socks.
It’s a Friday
But I feel like crap
And my eyes sting.
There are friends seated beside me
And friends whispering behind me,
There’s a stool on which I’m sitting
But I can’t seem to think why I’m here.
Another voice is talking
But I can’t hear her
And I really don’t want to know
About tooth decay.
I know there’s a bed at home,
Where I can sleep,
And forget everything I learned
And I can be alone.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

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silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2005-05-15 03:16 AM


the perfect end of week syndrome! except i get it every monday tuesday and thursday. i like fridays at school, the only day i can be bothered with.

fun write, not so powerful but fun all the same

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
2 posted 2005-05-16 12:01 PM


Lol, I wrote it in science and I was in a "Don't care" mood. Thanks for replying.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
3 posted 2005-05-18 12:58 PM


flucking love it dude

science gets to me to, i always seem to be in "dont care" moods during science.

awesome

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2005-05-20 12:35 PM


Yeah I can sorta relate.  I slept in a grocery store last Friday night and man, those cleaning machines are pretty friggin loud.  But the people were nice.  They told me hi and let me sleep until about 6:30am when they asked me to leave.  I don't know.  I don't care...

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me.  -The Beattles

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