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Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2005-05-12 12:25 PM

There are stones on my soul  holding me back
evils are lurking in silent attack.
Burdens of sorrow, heartbreak, and wrong
silent as time all the day long.
Burdens of stress, anger and hate
constantly pulling double my weight.
There are weights on my soul holding me down,
I can't seem to breathe   i'm starting to drown.
Burdens of silence   troubles unspoken
so many things   chaotic and broken
So much rage! 'gainst myself and all others
a blanket of pain   chokingly smothers.
My simple heart   can't understand
what happened to God? and a helping hand?
What happened to people? they're so heartless and cruel
they say my life got me  i'm a sucker   a fool.
Why'd this happen to me?  What have i done?!
to deserve all of this   am i the only one?
I'm dying each day   it's simple you see
the stones on my soul    are murdering me.

Nov 20, 00

btw i also post in open poetry if you are interested in reading the pieces that i don't post here thank you

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
-Godsmack
"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
(I Ride The Short Bus)

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

1 posted 2006-04-22 02:47 PM

Nothing?

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

SATURN
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 78
ok,us

2 posted 2006-05-04 12:29 PM

This is very good and full of images this ranks in my faves by you. i dont have alot of time to get on but i will try to read more of your poems keep it up.

~SATURN~

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

3 posted 2006-05-05 12:04 PM

Every sad, But don’t most of use write sad stuff. Well any ways it was every good. I love how you wrote it, different.

*Leah

even in the worst of it I still have hope and in the best I hold on and let go when its time.

pullingxthextrigger
Member

since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

4 posted 2006-05-05 07:26 PM

woah! that was amazing! awesome
keep it up

~nora<3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3 llx - P!ATD!

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

5 posted 2006-05-07 10:37 PM

Michael.. wow.. I loved this.. so wonderfully written.. I'm not sure where you get your inspiration from but keep it up.

These are my fav. lines..

"Burdens of silence troubles unspoken
so many things chaotic and broken"

they just seemed to say something to me..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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