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Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2005-05-11 01:30 PM


I'm trapped, in a sea of weightless rubbage,
in a place where all reality ceases to exist.
Gravity fades as your limbs go numb,
colors bleed and swirl together in a whirlpool of greens
  and reds and blues
and as they swirl faster, just black.
Repulsive black, surrounds me
filling my lungs and invading my mind,
but i reject it
  it's angry.
Enraged at my nerve to exspell it, forced from it's host
   vile parasite
Finally    free
blackness fading   slowly    downed    
and awaken to a world that's dead within itself.
written 5-22-01

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
-Godsmack
"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
-unknown

© Copyright 2005 Michael Lentini - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2005-05-11 02:40 PM


Very nice.  Written in images that describe more than words can say.

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me.  -The Beattles

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