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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-05-09 03:21 PM

I miss you when I sleep at night,
And each waking moment,
You are on my mind,

Can I ask you to come back?
And give me a chance,
U and I together,
Fulfill our romance,

I stole you from me,
I can’t stop you now,
For you have been through it all,
Just can’t figure out my sins somehow,

The days of happiness all gone,
I never knew I would hurt u so bad,
Lost you forever,
I can’t make it better,

Just wish I knew this first time around,
U should have left me then,
Saving yourself pain and heartache,
So many nights with no dry eyes,

Tell me how I could mess up,
And let my angel fly away,
My only way in heaven,
Now I cry and repent,

I wish I knew just what to do,
Girl, what can I do now?
If only I loved you so strongly,
As you loved me then.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2005-05-10 12:06 PM

Chicks are crazy. Be warned. lol

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me. -The Beattles

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2005-05-10 02:03 AM

tell me about it..

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2005-05-12 03:45 AM

this is beautiful xeonox...
and all chicks are not crazy thankyou very much... just most of us.... hehe...
ne ways... you are an amazing writer and this is brilliant.... you always use so uch imagery in your work to paint a picture for the readers...
well done.... keep more coming
Ruth
ps.. the only way to make up for what you did wrong is to be friends, show her she can trust you then tell her how you feel about her.... good luck

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2005-05-12 09:28 AM

Thanks aussie teen. I have written a dozen or poem on this particular person. I will usually post them here, Corner Pub, or Teen poetry.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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