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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-05-04 01:49 AM



When do you get real?
Tiny threads define who I am
Faith in a very big God
No athiest can tell me different

What do I care about?
God my lord and master
Nothing else matters
If I die today I leave happy

Life has been totally awesome thus far
The pain of my heart being shoved in my mouth
When I say the words "I love you"
You grow numb to it after a while
Doesn't hurt anymore
After I die I'll be free
Safe and sound in paradise
The love of God face to face

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2005-05-04 02:49 AM


I read you all the time, and this time I just thought I'd let you know I was here.

I envy the confidence of these verses.


green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-05-04 11:12 AM


Wow, that coming from serenity blaze.  I've read quite a few of yours and you're stinking good.  Thank you.

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me.  -The Beattles

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3 posted 2005-05-04 12:34 PM


interesting write actually.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2005-05-04 01:00 PM


Thank you.  I don't think I had planned to finish where I did.  Just sorta happens when they're telling you its time to get off their computer.  

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me.  -The Beattles

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