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spritrider87
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0 posted 2005-05-03 11:55 AM


I am rateing this poem as mature because it has some content that might not be suitable for those easily offended or upset.
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She came to me with bruised eyes
Her heart in her hands
Asking to be fixed
But I didn't know how
I hid her away
Hoping she'd be ok
Somehow
Someway

Slowly fixing her broken heart
Just to have it break again
Her bruises get darker
As her eyes dim
Her body is battered
Her mind
Her soul
Were raped

Her trust is fragile
Like a bird made out of glass
If the winds to strong
It shatters in the grass
And no matter how you glue it together
It'll never be the same
Because it is weaker
In the end

She quiets when the thoughts intrude
Withdrawn into her world
There's pain behind a placid face
As the death bells chime
Tears flood her inner world
Yet the outer sees none
An angel with her wings torn off
A bird that never sings

She came to me with bruised eyes
Her heart in her hands
Asking to be fixed
But I didn't know how
I hid her away
Hoping she'd be ok
Somehow
Someway

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

© Copyright 2005 Jian Sterry - All Rights Reserved
spritrider87
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1 posted 2005-05-06 09:08 AM


well I guess this is to be expected. Hope you guys like this one. i'll write another one later. bye...

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

Copperbell
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2 posted 2005-05-07 12:47 PM


it feels like a slice of real - I like this
spritrider87
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3 posted 2005-05-17 11:18 AM


it is real. its me. i tend to just hide myself and hope thins will fix themselves

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

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