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green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-05-01 01:06 AM



He predicted my incarceration
Spoke stupidity into me
His arrogant alcoholic lips
He doesn't know

Lost what I don't know
Gain my own life
I'm not a liar
My lies are true

The pretty face
Was a beautiful idea
A store front to sell
Right before my eyes
Don't lie to me
Don't pretend
A block of time for realism
A small space for truth

My child inside
Its me
I'm a little boy
Inside a man's body and Jesus in my heart

The writting on the walls
A sharpie tells all
The secrets of my journal
But who are you?

The games we all know and love
Addictions in a paper straw
A 16 ounce juicy encouragement
I'll last longer than you

Its what I need
He teaches me the hard lessons
I skipped the easier paths
Cause I didn't want to trip
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I rarely say anything at the bottom of a poem, but when I read this slower it made me laugh a few times.  
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Another note and another piece entirely: DFAC slide into oblivion that became chaos of which I've yet to comprehend and still don't understand.  Soon though.  I'll write about it.  Enjoy.

2 Corinthians 12:2 -I was caught up into the third heaven fourteen years ago.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2005-06-29 12:20 PM


There sure are a lot of poems in this forum that have no replies. Damn, this is good!!! I'm going to have to read all your stuff now..and there's a bunch of it.

I'll read it and comment as I can.

"fit to be tied"

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-06-30 08:54 AM


Its funny you would have that face as your icon because thats what i used have.  Thank you.

-GIS

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stupid Angel"

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3 posted 2005-07-01 06:47 PM


your type of poem is very creative..it can inspire me to write a few when I feel the need to write dark stuff...

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2005-07-02 03:54 PM


Thank you.  Anytime you need inspiration I guess you know where to find it.  Thats a compliment in more than one way so thank you.

-GIS

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stupid Angel"

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