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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2005-04-26 08:44 PM

where are you now?
it's been a while
since i last saw you
and i miss your face
will you come back for me?
take me away in your arms
where i am forever safe?
how far have you gone
since i last said your name?
called it out to the night
in hope that wherever you are
you will hear me
and scream my name back
when will you return?
to take my hand
and kiss all my pain away
tell me everything's okay?
everything's okay
when are you now?
its been too many miles
since i last held your face
will you come back
for me?

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2005-04-28 09:40 PM

another good write..not as strong..

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2005-04-29 01:04 AM

yea this one was me trying to get out of a very long writers block... went on for months actually!

definitly isn't one of my strongest, no.

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

3 posted 2005-05-06 08:53 PM

Sometimes our weakest poetry can show our truest emotions. When we don't think about it too much and just let the feelings and words fit into place. Don't pass a poem off as not good enough, if it came out at all, that's a testiment to the human spirit.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2005-05-07 01:49 AM

that was amazingly honest

i fully agree with what Mad Hatter said

im here without you baby

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-05-10 07:00 PM

any time that we can pour our emotions onto the page, it becomes GOOD poetry.
Very well done.

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

6 posted 2005-05-12 02:00 PM

I'd agree with the other comments complicity isn't necessarily better, sometimes simple and right to the point is the truest form of expression. A good write tho

"I go to parties sometimes until 4, it's hard to leave when you can't find the door..." Joe Walsh

(I Ride The Short Bus)

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