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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-04-20 08:49 PM



She tells me pretty things
In the quiet
Step into an island void
I see

One mind, she thinks of survival
Strong?
Is it right?
Who am I?
Lets just sit back

Watch the scenery pass
Passing thickness of time
Where is the strength?
Imaginative imagination
It sets apart

Its beauty here, pin point display
Down a line on a path
Somewhere with some power
Instant stretch cable cord

Babbling on still
How great it is
Changing me
Another cigarrette, just puff, inhale

He's the psycho
A killer
Fear him suffocate with play
Leader of a foggy mind
A pinch here, a pinch there, take away

Cough cough
Exhale
Dim and narrow
Curly with the hair

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-04-28 09:38 PM


random comment..Do u smoke???

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-04-29 12:06 PM


I've quit 6 times and am working on my 7th.  Yes and I hate those little... things that kill.  

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

Kaos
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3 posted 2005-05-11 01:57 PM


i like the word choice you used for this, it had a unique kind of feel to the reading of it... i liked it

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
Godsmack
"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
I Ride The Short Bus

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2005-05-11 02:35 PM


Yes, thank you.  I don't believe I've seen your name here before and seeing you only have 67ish posts welcome to pip.

-GIS

...and the way things are goin, they're gonna crucify me.  -The Beattles

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