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~K~
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since 2004-07-27
Posts 148


0 posted 2005-04-20 06:27 AM


Shield your eyes
If I could
I would
paint her
smiling
but her
features
are cast
in the
devil's
likeness
an angels
countenance
& a demon's charm
combine
to generate
& banish
hope

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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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1 posted 2005-04-20 09:10 AM


Whoa!

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-04-20 11:14 AM


yeah, double WHOA!  Now I'm embarrassed I posted mine...this was intense and so well done!!!!
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3 posted 2005-04-25 12:58 PM


paint her smile
with fingertips

this blank canvas,
vivid
empty space

where the imagination plays
tricks

slight of hand

determines demons from angels

and myth
from want.



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