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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2005-04-15 01:57 AM


Even though you already know the answer,
I'm so glad you took the time to ask.
So many people are just too afraid
That they hide behind a mask.

So much hurt has brought you here now
You wonder if anything is true.
So before you make that important decision,
Know that I believe in you...

And I'd wait a thousand lifetimes
If you'd say you'd be there too.

I love you.

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

© Copyright 2005 Carrigan Chantz - All Rights Reserved
green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2005-04-15 08:47 PM


This is a very cool poem.  And if I weren't considering the military at the moment, which I would consider a very important decision, and I hadn't asked you for advice on that decision I would pass this off and respond like you were just being creative and not talking to me, but you are and this time I'm not even worried about sounding prideful by assuming so.  Thank you.  The feelings are pretty much mutual except where we have both drawn a mutual line and are friends.  Love in Christ, you rock.

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
2 posted 2005-04-17 06:03 PM


Aw. This is gorgeous. Definately saved my friend, awesome.

Hollow.
Courtney.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

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