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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2005-04-08 02:03 AM


Tears
Rolling Down My Cheek
As You Explore
Happiness
And Take Mine Away
Dont You Feel For Me?
Pity At Least
No
You Dont
Just Take It
My Heart
Rip It
So I Can Rest
In Peace
Without The Pain
And Still
Be Happy
For You
Once
And
Again

Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next?

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darkness_witch
Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath
1 posted 2005-04-08 02:11 AM


beautiful ha can so relate to this one

love the way the poem was set out

really straight up and open.

Just Take It
My Heart
Rip It
So I Can Rest
In Peace
Without The Pain


loved that part especially cus i know how you feel.


cant wait to read more of yours

love and empathy
sophie

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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