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darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2005-04-05 05:31 AM

trust
so hard
so complicated
so confusing
so painful
when you break it.
when you hurt me.
when you tear me to pieces
then never bother to
pick me up off the floor
and put me
together again.

faith
i lack that.
alot of it is lies
and promises
that get broken.
like friendships
and trust
i wish i had it -
faith -
in you.
and my life
and something bigger than that.

hope
all I have,
i guess.
hope that tomorrow
is better.
hope that you care
wether I’m with
you tomorrow
or not.
hope that
you trust me
and my decisions.

forgiveness
i give this out
for no charge
and I expect nothing in return.
I loved watching you crawl
to me.
begging for it.
you take advantage of me.
and I would hope
and pray
you would realise how bad you
hurt me.

You never forgave me
For the mistake I made
And every day
I regret it
And hate myself
More and more
Because I miss you
And I forgive you
And I deserve something back

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2005-04-05 03:35 PM

Oh wow. Nothing has been quite like this for a while. I am so so happy to see your name on the list.
Second stanza, was the very best. I can't wait to see you today so I can tell you how great you are and how awesome this is.
Sad, but be-a-utiful.

Hollow.
Courtney.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-04-09 10:03 PM

Wow. I love it. Watch the pride scrape and cry off my face, dying to give the gratitude here deserved. Trust. Drop a bomb in your lap and wait because you know its friendly and even if it does blow you to bits, it will kindly put them all back together again. Awesome.

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

3 posted 2005-04-26 05:27 AM

I loved watching you crawl
to me.
begging for it.
you take advantage of me.
and I would hope
and pray
you would realise how bad you
hurt me.

god sophie you are too amzing for words.
that was SO good, i can't even begin to explain. god you are BACK even if i may never be. if i could swear, there would be many many words. kcuf you woman. brilliance.

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

4 posted 2005-04-26 04:55 PM

Very well written....this hits home...

Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

5 posted 2005-04-27 03:55 AM

hey!
wow it feels so weird to be writting reviews again lol.
Do i really need to say anything?
So powerful, it leaves and imprint! great!
bex

"I have a hard time keeping from drowning in this crazy buisness" - River Phoenix 1970-1993

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

6 posted 2005-04-28 09:28 PM

I really enjoyed the following paragraph.

You never forgave me
For the mistake I made
And every day
I regret it
And hate myself
More and more
Because I miss you
And I forgive you
And I deserve something back

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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