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Dark Poetry #4

A handbag full of needles

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

0 posted 2005-04-05 02:11 AM

Her handbag’s full of needles
But her mother doesn’t lover her
Her handbag’s full and needless
But her father had a glove on his hand

Slipping on the curves of the high-rise
Another street lamp fades below
But her daddy doesn’t know
That when her eyes grow cold
And she begins to slumber with the soil
That glove has no grip to hold

Hey, willow locks
Could you try to smile?
Your needles are empty
Not a thing worth your while
(opened eyes at last)

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2005-04-05 11:55 AM

creative and meaningful.

enjoyed.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2005-04-06 12:51 PM

hey this is really good. love the last stanza, it kicks!

really awesome

love and empathy

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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