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The Butterfly
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The Butterfly |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
The butterfly came out of her cocoon only to find she was viewing the moon She asked herself, "Where is the sunshine?" What has she walked herself into this time? Hiding in the corner by the old oak tree She sat and thought about what it could be She felt it was either die or be doomed Finally she chose the latter of the two Night turned to light at the crack of dawn She peered over her shoulder at what seemed like the sun Over the mountain the sun began to shine The little butterfly knew she'd be fine Dancing and prancing and jumping with glee At last she felt lively and free Happiness being the only emotion she felt Was a wonderful ending considering the beginning she'd been dealt. By, PoetOfDarkness |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
And thus this could have been called "The Meaning of Life". Very well written verses of hope. There's always something more about poems (and poets) that use the butterfly. Great job! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
Thank you.... in some way it represents my life..  |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Cool Nice to read and Very clear message Live It |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Really cool. Just like life. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Awesome. Hollow. Courtney. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
thank you thank you... sorry i have not replyed sooner i have been battling tonsilitis.. manda |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
Cool, a very unique way to potentially describe the begining of anything. a very positive message though. i enjoyed the read thank you " How can i feel if i can't breathe...?" |
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