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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-03-24 04:14 AM



The giggles that laugh
Rolling topple path
Destiny, desire, duties hath
One with...
Do the math

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

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The Jackal
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1 posted 2005-03-24 02:47 PM


very interesting, i dont grasp the meaning but i dont grasp the ocean either, but i know its very deep and so is this poem

New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire

Purity
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since 2001-11-20
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Once Upon, USA
2 posted 2005-03-25 10:46 AM


LOL... Dude, this was a phenom. So much with so few words... and very creative. Liked, mucho. I take it your journey you are currently on is showing you the grandest of great times.

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2005-03-27 07:39 PM


Thank you Jackal.  Deep oceans are the hardest to predict, and leave plenty of room for submerging.  Kinda chaotic actually.

Ah, the journey was nothing, although I did manage to pass three chapters.  At the moment I'm more concerned with my path rather than journey.  Thank you.

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

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