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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-03-24 04:13 AM



These words rush from my lips
A wetness in my face
Written in the water
Trickle trickle rush splatter ripple

I feel you upside down
Your feet razors and firey cables
Your mouth gagged with an atmospheric gray gauze
I miss you,... from where you died

Your skull so peaceful...
Sleep stench scream hurting in the pain
Mouthful of fire
Soaring in a tinkling death

Power, love, selfless
Wasn't it good enough?
Can you climb?
Acidic facial erosion, I'm blind with love

Just minature umbrellas
Combustion
Drinks that humidify
Slosh slip blood to purify

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A
1 posted 2005-03-24 02:55 PM


i like your vision, you got alot of eerie visual imagery which i enjoy, very nicely done

New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire

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