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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Let’s say yellow Is the jaundiced flag, And green Smokes a cigarette of envy. Well then the blue Is that heart of ice, And red Is soaked with fire, blood and wine. Your rainbow Is not so much better now Than my black You judge her mind While you hold her at arms-length And avoid the eyes, which might just See you for who you are. You bury him alive Guilty with the bullet-holes you shot As harmless insults You jump over his crumpled face And head straight for his beliefs. Your rainbow Is not so much better now Than my black Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
Nice Bite to this, enjoyed short and to the point New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
This was great, Hollow!! Loved the "chorus" stanzas! Theirs the multicolors of the rainbow, and yours the "all blacks"...lol. New Zealand's Dark Poet Laureate. Excellent. Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Aw Purity, you are so sweet. Go All Blacks! Hollow. Courtney. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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