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Mind Flash(Feeding Frenzy)
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Mind Flash(Feeding Frenzy) |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
When I occupy the same head space as you I face a beast that desires to be fed and whats a poor little boy to do I shovel it in, I play the friend ,the failure The son of a pimp and you eat this up without chewing or thinking you imagine you wear the Power suit The one that always suits you and I do I'm at the right place, the right time to be manipulated I feel the hot breath down my back pushing me further into your sphere your space where the term "feeding frenzy" is given life given definition you desire me to be stimulated you wish to bottle this and market it to the masses you barely see my web,you should ran before you walked you dont know that ive been waiting, like a good democratic cow and I am hungry; I am ravenous this is all a mind flash you are caught in a mind flash and its all about starting and then stopping New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
nice! I like this. it feels almost conversational. thank you for reading my work. it means a lot to me sir. for I admire your writing. have a great night.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I agree, Lexy . . it's Prose. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i disagree; this is poetry, without care for formatting or other things. it would be the same if it was all one line. it's raw without trying to be. -majnu |
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