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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-03-17 02:53 PM



Sell it cheap
Unfairly though
Simple creep
Haunting woe

Murderous death set free
Freely step and go
Leave to else where
Killing more freely there

Pinch and tease
Watch'em bleed
Blood running down their knees
Vengeance future planted seed

You see what I did
Know I don't care
If I didn't care
Memory wouldn't stare

See it again, rapid severe
Hunted and stalk mentality
Leave myself running from me
Pitch and twitch a droplet tear
Hounds of pain around living
Die and gasp, gagging plea
Honest and innocent rest here
The corrosion filth, ...forgive me?

Proud voices ignorance
Unlearned of the obvious
Dead the skulls rotten dirt
Only in heaven this truth won't hurt

To watch a man die
Plats of blood lie
Ruined souls
That perish to fly

Ghastly blank in a daze
Current events but a haze
Hot breathing verdict stays
Tis the life of broken ways

See it again, rapid severe
Hunted and stalk mentality
Leave myself running from me
Pitch and twitch a droplet tear
Hounds of pain around living
Die and gasp, gagging plea
Honest the innocent resting here
My corrosion's filth, FORGIVE ME!

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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1 posted 2005-03-18 09:04 PM


Craig,

first I thought you meant Jesus, I didn't see the title and then I found this, just read:

http://www.freerepublic.com/focus/f-religion/1360012/posts

green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-03-19 01:27 PM


thats cool.  When I wrote this it was pretty much about the same thing, but I guess that was kind of obvious.
Thanks.

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

littlewing
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3 posted 2005-03-19 09:09 PM


No, it wasnt obvious at all, like I said, I never look at titles, I read first and there were many things going through my head . . . I mean, this can relate to one feeling guilt, not just Jesus or Barabbas . . .


green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2005-03-22 03:34 AM


Yeah, thats the thing about my titles.  Their actually, I guess more like people, as in once ther are alive, they pretty much exist as their own entities.  And yeah the guilt thing was their.  Thanks.

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

EagleScorpion
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5 posted 2005-03-29 02:12 AM


nice
EagleScorpion
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6 posted 2005-03-29 02:13 AM


very nice
green_itchy_stuff
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7 posted 2005-03-29 06:53 PM


Thank you eagle.  
Thank you eagle.
      Thank you scorpion.

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

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