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ForeverPoetic
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 28
Streaming down a tranquil sea

0 posted 2005-03-16 05:14 PM



I hate you.
What did they do?
Did they really deserve this.
The abuse.
The torment.
The scars.

Your excuse was, its summer.
It goes down like water.
As so did they.

I hope you had your fun.
Not one
Not two
But a family of four
You couldnt control yourself.

You screamed.
Pushed.
Hit.
But that wasnt good enough.
You had to have your way with them.

Was this all worth it?
The drinking.
The fighting.
The abusing.

The worst part.
You got away with it.
Away with all evils.
Insanity kils...

© Copyright 2005 James - All Rights Reserved
KuruShio
Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110

1 posted 2005-03-16 10:58 PM


oh damn this is nice. well not nice like oooh this is so nice and pretty but wow really to the heart of the matter and twisted all the while, i like i like...
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
2 posted 2005-03-17 07:00 AM


Wow...

Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next?

Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2005-03-17 11:23 PM


Very deep write,,,the reader can go so many different ways with it,,I like it very much

No one really cares,,why should I?

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2005-03-18 09:22 PM


very nice James,
biting, like  shark . . .

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